Tricky Task

I've only got a tiny bit of room at the end of the thank you page in Jarred Dreams to talk about book 2 (EATS). I'm finding this really hard to get right. It is the balance between making it sound enticing without giving too much of the plot away.
I have a fantastic Critique Group through Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI). We've called ourselves the KC Critterati - mainly because we meet at Kings Cross. They are brilliant and so helpful. I got them on the case. I've cherry picked the best bits out of their suggestions and this is what I've got:
Now For Book 2: EATS
When best mates Lucas and Tucker win a competition to cook with celebrity chefs everything comes to a boil. Can they stop stirring up trouble and serve the just desserts in time?
Camilla's second book EATS is out soon. For more information go to her website: www.camillachester.com
(this will be my new website address, hopefully, if I can get all of that sorted too)
​Whaddyathink?